He took off running, pulling me behind him. I tried my best to keep up but the pain in my side slowed me down. A bullet whizzed past my head and another hit the fencepost near me. Tattoo Man was firing a gun as he staggered behind us.
“He’s got a gun!” I screamed at my rescuer.
“No shit! Shut up and keep running!”
Love it! And I'm going to 'like' your fan page while I'm here.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year!
Congrats on your upcoming release! It sounds like a really exciting story!
ReplyDeleteOoooo sounds like high action High adventure!! Congrats on the new Release! I look forward to it!!
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Angela
LOL! But sometimes you just have to state the obvious! Congrats on your upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteExciting action scene, Angela.
ReplyDeleteIntense with a nice touch of humor. Great scene!
ReplyDeleteLove the humor amongst the tense action scene! Congrats on you upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteEeek! No shit is right!
ReplyDeleteLove how intense this is!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the release. I'll have to check it out
ReplyDeleteHehehe No shit! Congrats on the upcoming release. You have an awesome cover.
ReplyDeleteLOL. Very funny! Great writing
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for stopping by and making my first Six Sentence Sunday so great!
ReplyDelete"shut up and keep running!" Great advice! LOL!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your upcoming release--you've certainly gotten me interested.
ReplyDeleteRun...shut up and run- ain't it like a man to be controlling...lol
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